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Feature-style stories outperform traditional news stories in readership, satisfaction and image.

That’s according to “The Impact Study of Newspaper Readership” (PDF).… Read the full article

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Impact study: Features boost readership, satisfaction, image

Feature-style stories outperform traditional news stories in readership, satisfaction and image.

Feature article structure outperforms pyramid
“There is strong evidence that an increase in the [number] of feature-style stories has wide-ranging benefits,” write Impact researchers.

That’s according to “The Impact Study of Newspaper Readership” (PDF).

It was sponsored by the Newspaper Association of America and the American Society of Newspaper Editors. For this study, researchers:

  • Analyzed a representative sample of 100 newspapers from across the country
  • Asked 37,000 readers 450 questions about their reactions to their newspaper
  • Conducted a content analysis of 47,500 stories from the newspapers

The result: In “one of the most thought-provoking discoveries” of the study, researchers found that feature-style stories outperformed traditional news stories in readership, satisfaction and image.

What’s a feature-style story?

The Impact researchers make a strong distinction between feature stories and feature-style stories. If your chief technology officer has a huge collection of Disney figurines, and you decide to take a photo of him surrounded by plastic princesses for an intranet profile, that’s a feature story. Not a feature-style story.

But when you cover hard business, environmental, political, economic, scientific and other serious topics in the feature-style story structure, that’s a feature-style story. Feature-style writing, according to the researchers, is:

  • More narrative, with a beginning, middle and end
  • Often illustrates points through characters or anecdotes
  • Likely to use more colorful language and a more playful writing style 

“A concern editors commonly express is that feature-style writing means ‘softening’ or ‘dumbing down’ the news,” said the researchers. “‘Feature-style’ is not a euphemism or proxy for ‘soft news.’ Writers can use feature-style writing to cover hard news stories without compromising the stories’ informational value or focus. We’re not describing a story type but a writing style.”

Feature-style stories, according to Impact:

1. Increase readership

Feature-style stories seem easier to read than the traditional inverted-pyramid news structure. (In this study, easy to read includes is relaxing to read and makes it easy to find what I’m looking for.) Making a message easy to read is one of the best ways to increase readership, the study found. That is, according to the study, the higher the score on easy to read, the more likely people are to:

  • Read an information source more often
  • Read it more completely
  • Spend more time reading it

“Considering that only 5% of all politics stories are written in feature-style,” researchers wrote, “even one additional feature-style politics story per week would make a difference.”

What kind of difference could you make by adding features to your communications?

2. Increase satisfaction

The feature-style story structure boosts satisfaction in stories on topics including politics, sports, science and health. Newspapers with more feature-style political stories, for example, have readers who express higher satisfaction with their political coverage. Yet only 5% of all political stories are written in the feature style, according to the study.

Are you missing opportunities to boost your readers’ satisfaction with your messages?

3. Improve brand perception

Organizations that run more feature-style stories are seen as more:

  • Fun
  • Honest
  • Intelligent
  • Personable
  • Neighborly
  • In the know
  • Thought provoking
  • In touch with the values of readers

“There is strong evidence that an increase in the [number] of feature-style stories has wide-ranging benefits,” write the researchers. “It’s the [organizations] that incorporate feature-style writing in a broad range of topics that see the most benefit in brand perception.” That’s a pretty big impact.

  • What structure draws more readers?

    Writers say, “We use the inverted pyramid because readers stop reading after the first paragraph.” But in new research, readers say, “We stop reading after the first paragraph because you use the inverted pyramid.”Catch Your Readers, a persuasive-writing workshop

    If the traditional news structure doesn’t work, how should we organize our messages?

    Master a structure that’s been proven in the lab to outperform the traditional news format at Catch Your Readers — a persuasive-writing workshop.

    There, you’ll learn an organizing scheme that grabs readers’ attention, keeps it for the long haul and leaves a lasting impression.

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Source: “The Power to Grow Readership: Research from the Impact Study of Newspaper Readership,” the Newspaper Association of America and the American Society of Newspaper Editors, April 2001

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A way around the pyramid https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/08/a-way-around-the-pyramid/ https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/08/a-way-around-the-pyramid/#respond Mon, 29 Aug 2016 04:45:09 +0000 http://www.wyliecomm.com/?p=14426 Lift ideas off the page with display copy

There is one great thing about the inverted pyramid lead.

“The only benefit of the inverted pyramid lead was that it put a lot of valuable information high in the story,” write Mario R.… Read the full article

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Lift ideas off the page with display copy

There is one great thing about the inverted pyramid lead.

A way around the pyramid
More bang for your buck Use display copy, not the inverted pyramid, to make it easy for readers to get the most important information quickly. Image by Jim Hammer

“The only benefit of the inverted pyramid lead was that it put a lot of valuable information high in the story,” write Mario R. Garcia and Pegie Stark, authors of Eyes On the News: The Poynter Institute Color Research.

But, they say, there is a workaround: “Some papers are learning to do that with more effective heads and deck[s].”

That’s right: Lift your key ideas off the page with display copy.

Six places to put your key messages

Garcia and Stark recommend that you embed your most important information in:

  • A main head
  • A deck to expand the head
  • Color-coded summaries of the three parts or modules of the story
  • Subheads and summaries at each module
  • A numbering system where appropriate
  • A closing box of more information
  • What structure draws more readers?

    Writers say, “We use the inverted pyramid because readers stop reading after the first paragraph.” But in new research, readers say, “We stop reading after the first paragraph because you use the inverted pyramid.”Catch Your Readers, a persuasive-writing workshop

    If the traditional news structure doesn’t work, how should we organize our messages?

    Master a structure that’s been proven in the lab to outperform the traditional news format at Catch Your Readers — a persuasive-writing workshop.

    There, you’ll learn an organizing scheme that grabs readers’ attention, keeps it for the long haul and leaves a lasting impression.

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Source: Mario R. Garcia and Pegie Stark, Eyes On the News: The Poynter Institute Color Research, The Poynter Institute for Media Studies, 1991

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No. 1 way to increase readership https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/04/make-your-copy-easy-to-read/ https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/04/make-your-copy-easy-to-read/#respond Sat, 02 Apr 2016 13:33:30 +0000 http://www.wyliecomm.com/?p=13691 Make your message easier to read

Making a publication “easy to read” is the No. 1 way to increase readership.

If newspapers (and, by extension, other publications) become more “relaxing to read” and make it easier “to find what I’m looking for,” people will:

  • Spend more time reading the publication
  • Read it more completely
  • Read it more often

That was a key finding of “Impact,” a study by the Readership Institute.… Read the full article

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Make your message easier to read

Making a publication “easy to read” is the No. 1 way to increase readership.

Can you read me now? People spend more time reading, read more completely and read more often messages that are easy to read. Image from iStock.

If newspapers (and, by extension, other publications) become more “relaxing to read” and make it easier “to find what I’m looking for,” people will:

  • Spend more time reading the publication
  • Read it more completely
  • Read it more often

That was a key finding of “Impact,” a study by the Readership Institute.

How do you make it easy to read?

  • How can you reach all of your readers?

    Read it and weep. More than half of all Americans have basic or below-basic reading skills, according to the DOE’s latest adult literacy test.

    How well are you doing reaching these folks with your messages? Rev Up Readability — our clear-writing workshop

    To reach all of your readers — regardless of their reading level — please join me at Rev Up Readability, — our clear-writing workshop.

    You’ll learn to make every piece you write easier to read and understand. You’ll walk away with secrets you can use to reach more readers, measurably improve readability and sell concise writing to management. And you’ll learn to write messages that get more people to read your piece, read more of it, read it faster, understand it better and remember it longer.

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Source: “Understanding and Improving ‘Easy to Read’ Content,” Readership Institute

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Think outside the pyramid for writing structure https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/02/think-outside-the-pyramid/ https://www.wyliecomm.com/2016/02/think-outside-the-pyramid/#comments Mon, 22 Feb 2016 05:00:52 +0000 http://www.wyliecomm.com/?p=13414 The traditional news structure fails readers

If I told you there was a communication tool that reduces readership, diminishes understanding and causes engagement to take a nosedive, would you use it?… Read the full article

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The traditional news structure fails readers

If I told you there was a communication tool that reduces readership, diminishes understanding and causes engagement to take a nosedive, would you use it?

Think outside the pyramid for writing structure
If only the inverted pyramid were this colorful The traditional news structure gets ‘more boring as the reader reads down,’ according to a classic study by the American Society of Newspaper Editors.

Friends, there is such a tool, and I am afraid you are using it every day. It’s called the inverted pyramid. And, according to “Ways With Words,” a classic study by the American Society of Newspaper Editors, it does “not work well with readers.”

The problem with the pyramid

“Ways With Words” researchers studied four story structures and found that traditional, inverted-pyramid stories:

  • “Do not work well with readers,” and “did not justify their predominance in today’s newspapers.”
  • Scored low in readership and understanding.
  • Made a mediocre showing in “involvement,” or whether the story made readers care about the news. (In our business, we call this “engagement.”)
  • Were the least effective at getting the reader to the jump of all story forms studied.

Researchers identified two problems with the inverted pyramid:

  • The story gets more boring as the reader reads down.”
  • “Journalists put background and context in the second half of the pyramid, so the reader who does not know that background cannot understand the top of the story. As a result, only journalists and sources can fully understand inverted-pyramid stories.”

Why are we still using this thing?

Back away from the pyramid.

Instead of sticking with a story form that’s been proven in the lab not to work, you’d think writers would experiment with other story structures. But, the researchers lamented:

“The basic conservatism and frantic pace of our profession keeps us from enlarging our repertoire of forms. So year by year, we keep boring and confusing our readers, and driving them away. … We should think of the inverted pyramid as A form, rather than THE form.”

Amen.

  • What structure draws more readers?

    Writers say, “We use the inverted pyramid because readers stop reading after the first paragraph.” But in new research, readers say, “We stop reading after the first paragraph because you use the inverted pyramid.”Catch Your Readers, a persuasive-writing workshop

    If the traditional news structure doesn’t work, how should we organize our messages?

    Master a structure that’s been proven in the lab to outperform the traditional news format at Catch Your Readers — a persuasive-writing workshop.

    There, you’ll learn an organizing scheme that grabs readers’ attention, keeps it for the long haul and leaves a lasting impression.

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