paragragh Archives - Wylie Communications, Inc. https://www.wyliecomm.com/tag/paragragh/ Writing workshops, communication consulting and writing services Tue, 16 Jan 2024 14:23:32 +0000 en-US hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.6.2 https://www.wyliecomm.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/10/cropped-wci-favico-1-32x32.gif paragragh Archives - Wylie Communications, Inc. https://www.wyliecomm.com/tag/paragragh/ 32 32 65624304 3 hacks to keep your content human https://www.wyliecomm.com/2023/10/3-hacks-to-keep-your-content-human/ https://www.wyliecomm.com/2023/10/3-hacks-to-keep-your-content-human/#respond Sat, 07 Oct 2023 17:27:31 +0000 https://www.wyliecomm.com/?p=32772 Go beyond the bot for engagement

A redditor posted a list of SEO resources for writers to my favorite Reddit subgroup the other day. Thanks, ChatGPT!Read the full article

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Go beyond the bot for engagement

A redditor posted a list of SEO resources for writers to my favorite Reddit subgroup the other day. Thanks, ChatGPT! another redditor responded.

3 hacks to keep your content human
Thanks, ChatGPT Make sure your message doesn’t have that chemical-vanilla-candle-scented, untouched-by-human-hands, robotish feel to it. Image by GAS-photo

The post was helpful enough. There was nothing wrong with it — grammar, spelling, punctuation: check! It just had that chemical-vanilla-candle-scented, untouched-by-human-hands, robotish feel to it.

How can you make sure you’re not writing like a robot?

1. Use a better structure.

Google is testing AI to write news articles. There goes half of our jobs! After all, even a robot can cram all of the W’s into the first paragraph. Even AI can organize the inverted pyramid.

But there’s a better structure — humans love it — and it’s waaaaaazaay above a robot’s pay grade. Start using that structure, and watch your engagement soar. Wait’ll your boss/client/customer sees this!

2.Write human content.

AI doesn’t do human interest, because it doesn’t know humans. Nothing ever happens to it, so it doesn’t tell stories.

Shift the types of content you write from “Just the facts, Ma’am” to more human content, and let ChatGPT catch you if it can. (It can’t.)

3. Make ChatGPT your BFF and research assistant

ChatGPT is a terrible writer. No prompt can make it as compelling as you — a brilliant, real, live human person.

But AI can be a great assistant. Send it out to find the details for a juicy-details lead or to fetch some statistics for your data story or to gather some headlines for your compression-of-details paragraph.

Meanwhile, you’re doing your nails, eating your lunch and hanging up all of the awards in your office.

Let’s see a robot try that.

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Six press release leads to avoid https://www.wyliecomm.com/2022/07/press-release-lead/ https://www.wyliecomm.com/2022/07/press-release-lead/#respond Fri, 01 Jul 2022 13:23:48 +0000 https://www.wyliecomm.com/?p=24154 How many of these have found their way into your releases?

Are you still using the fact pack — cramming who, what, when, where, why and how into the first paragraph of your news release?… Read the full article

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How many of these have found their way into your releases?

Are you still using the fact pack — cramming who, what, when, where, why and how into the first paragraph of your news release? Are you still married to the dated “XYZ Company today announced …” approach?

Press release lead
Lead the way Write press release leads that engage readers, instead of these PR 101 approaches.

These conventional formulas to press release leads are formulaic, old-fashioned and — let’s face it — dull.

Make sure these PR 101 leads don’t find their way into your releases:

1. Abstraction

Show, don’t tell. When writing news release leads, choose concrete details, not abstract ideas.

Good communication can prevent an accident from becoming a disaster.

2. Announcement

If you have something to announce, announce it! Don’t announce that you’re announcing it:

ABC Company today released its 2012 Corporate Sustainability Report, the first complete and integrated record of the company’s sustainability performance following the merger of ABC and XYZ in March.

3. Background

Background — also known as the blah blah blah — is no way to draw readers into a piece. Instead, leave the definitions, history lessons and broader context for the third paragraph.

Don’t start like this:

XYZ Company’s development of ear-blasting technologies began with the introduction of Make It Louder software in 2004. Since then, it has progressed to include three additional generations of ear-blasting technologies that continue to achieve the highest level of sound quality.

4. Fact pack

Instead of a “suitcase lead” — one you try to cram all of the story elements into — aim for a bikini lead. Cover just the interesting essentials.

After all, if you lead with all of the W’s, what do you put in the second paragraph?

On Aug. 4, XYZ’s first-ever system-wide physician networking event was held on top of the parking structure at XYZ La Jolla. With the theme, “Surf’s up on the Rooftop,” this well-attended event was open to all XYZ physicians and their guests, who dined on island-style cuisine and danced to a live band while watching the sunset.

5. Question

Planning to run a question lead? What if the reader doesn’t know — or care — the answer to your question?

Have you ever been in a situation where your personal interests seem to be in conflict with your responsibilities as an XYZ employee?

I don’t know. Have I? Maybe start by illustrating some situations where my personal interests are in conflict with my employment contract, instead.

6. Quotation

As anyone who’s ever interviewed an engineer knows, quotes aren’t necessarily riveting. And quotation marks don’t magically make them so.

“XYZ product is a smart, strategic investment for growers, and the ABC offer means it pays even more to plan ahead,” said Somebody Important at Allied Appliances. “XYZ product helps growers get the most out of every acre. Allied Appliances is doing all it can to ensure growers are prepared for 123 season.”

What to use instead?

Instead, make your release lead compelling with reader benefits, synthesizing the news or illustrating the idea with a feature lead.

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